Devil's Wings

Devil's Wings

She tries too hard,
To let them see
Her wings like sound,
In a lightening spree!

When she flaps them up
Then there it shows
Black and Red
Concealing a touch of snow

What's the snow? You may ask.
It's nothing but the traits,
Of the angel
She once was!

Now she tries too hard,
To cover the pure snow
With red roses
And a big blood bow!

The angel, you needn't
See, exploit and hurt
The devil's dance stays
To curb and to retort!

-J.B.Anjna

Comments

  1. Sudhiksha 200515 July 2020 at 01:07

    Wow this poem is awesome....loving it yar....😈...well it reminds me of Maleficent.....LONG LIVE EVIL!

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  2. Unknown15 July 2020 at 01:23

    Very nice poem 👍👍keep writing writing✍️ 😈😈

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  3. Unknown15 July 2020 at 01:31

    Nice poem...anju..keeping rocking with ur poem's

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  4. Unknown15 July 2020 at 01:59

    Loved it...keep writing

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  5. Unknown15 July 2020 at 08:08

    Super Anj keep writing it's really awesome 👍

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  6. Unknown15 July 2020 at 22:26

    Very nice and creativity poem..

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  7. V. V. Gurucharan15 July 2020 at 22:51

    She's got your poetic traits
    And no doubt she's set her sights
    By God, she's got the talent
    To shine on the literary firmament!

    Let her young wings flap
    It sounds like a thunderclap
    Her pen is sharp
    Is it Anjna's harp?

    Let her play with her words
    And wander amongst the birds
    Her future is bright
    Because she's our leading light!

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 01:51

      Thank you for the very lovely comment!! It is a huge delight to read it Sir! And thanks a lot for your support!! 😊😊😊😊

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    2. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:50

      It's very euphoric to recieve such support!! Stay tuned for more content!!!😊😊💖💖

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  8. Unknown15 July 2020 at 22:52

    First I like to accolade your thoughts really eye-popping. Each and every word in the verse top-notch . Keep going .

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:02

      Thank you for the eye grabbing comment!! Sure will.😊😊

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  9. Anonymous15 July 2020 at 23:01

    Amazing flow of imagery 😍 Keep writing dr💕

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  10. Shri gomathi15 July 2020 at 23:41

    Excellent👏👏👏 keep writing😎

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  11. Prof Samu15 July 2020 at 23:44

    Dear Anjana, I appreciate your insights. Really Wonderful....

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  12. Unknown15 July 2020 at 23:57

    I could find in her a young blooming bard. Applauds to anju .One more feather in your cap.

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  13. Rajeshwari16 July 2020 at 00:09

    Very nice poem ...keep writing

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  14. Ramesh16 July 2020 at 00:11

    Congrats Anjana. Powerfully written. Keep up the spirit - Dr. Princee

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:05

      Thank you very much for the encouragement!!!

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  15. Kalai16 July 2020 at 00:15

    Superbbbb, Anjna☺️ Keep writing ✌🏼

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  16. Unknown16 July 2020 at 00:16

    Excellent reflection in the form of writing

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:05

      Thank you for the support! It means a lot😊

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  17. Abubakkar Sithique16 July 2020 at 00:19

    As a poetry lover, I admire your far-fetched visionary skills. Too tender to amuse us.. We have had great poets in history blooming from younger days of life... Hope you will stamp your inspiration for people like me.. Godblessyou...

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:07

      Thank you very much for the encouraging words!!! It truly means a lot! Sure, let us bloom with our poems!!😊

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  18. Unknown16 July 2020 at 00:20

    Fantabulous poem ... keep going with the flow and upgrade it with passion dear ..Anjna

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:10

      Thanks a lot!!!!! Support means everything!😊😊

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  19. kumar16 July 2020 at 00:23

    Top notch.... Beauty in its thoughts.

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:10

      Thank you very much... for the beautiful comment!😊

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  20. Unknown16 July 2020 at 00:25

    Awesome writing... Beautiful words... Guddos to Anjna's vision..

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:11

      Thank you very much !!! It means a lot!😊😊😊😊

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  21. Dr.S.Vanitha16 July 2020 at 00:37

    Wow really amazing. Impressive one. Wishes for your next writing.

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  22. Subashini Kannan16 July 2020 at 00:38

    Amazing ! Very well written ! I’m impressed! Keep inspiring and keep up the good job 👏

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:13

      Thank you very much for the support!!! It means a lot to me!😊😊😊

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  23. Abilasha16 July 2020 at 00:44

    wow... its beautiful and deep...loved it

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:13

      Sincere thanks from me! Glad you loved it!😊😊😊

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  24. Tj16 July 2020 at 00:55

    Superbb poem

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  25. Unknown16 July 2020 at 01:19

    Glorious light of knowledge Anjana👌💪 Kavitha.

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:12

      Thank you very much for the light of encouragement!!!😊😊😊

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  26. Rebecca samson16 July 2020 at 01:23

    Congrats anjana keep writing..awesome poem really creative..all the best dear

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  27. Vasantha Sena J16 July 2020 at 01:25

    Excellent Anjana..keep rocking dear Angel❤

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  28. V.P.RATHI ARUMUGAM16 July 2020 at 01:36

    You impressed us by your Impressive Impulse. Keep writing young angel poet...

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 01:53

      Thank you very much! Your support means a lot!!!

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  29. Unknown16 July 2020 at 01:38

    You have the right talent, my dear grandchild. Write more and attempt different genres. God bless you.
    K Balasubramanian

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 01:49

      Thank you very much Grandad!!! I feel blessed... sure I will attempt all the different genres😊

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  30. Unknown16 July 2020 at 01:45

    Very nice and awesome poem dear.. Well done

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  31. Unknown16 July 2020 at 01:58

    Extremely good. Good flair for words. Impressive, aimed to Express complicated pictures. Done so much at ease. Good. Proud of a grandchild.🥰

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:43

      Thank you very much granny!!! Thanks for being my godmother!😊😊😊

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    2. Unknown16 July 2020 at 06:19

      Chandra aachi is really proud of you your Gene's too.

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    3. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 08:53

      Thanks grannyyy😄😄😄😄

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  32. Unknown16 July 2020 at 02:45

    Dream high, sparkle more and bright shine dear. It was a wonderful poem with good words keep rocking all the best Anjna.

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:49

      Thank you for the encouragement!!! It means everything to me! Sure I will! Stay tuned for more content!😊😊

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  33. Unknown16 July 2020 at 02:50

    Excellent Poem! Filled with Beautiful Images! I appreciate the poetic fervour wìthin you Anjna! May God bless you dear!

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 02:52

      Thank you very much for the appreciation... it means everything!😊😊💖💖

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  34. sakthika16 July 2020 at 03:00

    Let this tiny Angel's wings
    Cajole all the evils
    By her mighty power
    Let her pen covers
    And conceals all the evils
    By her sweet poem
    Spread your wings continuously Anjana,,,,,

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 08:53

      Thanks a ton for the lovely poem in return!!! Thanks a lot for the blessings😊😊😊

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  35. Shalini16 July 2020 at 03:13

    Like Mother,Like Daughter.
    No doubt.
    Nice poem from a kid.keep going Dear Anjna.

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 03:49

      Thank you very much Mam!!! It means a lot💖💖💖

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  36. Unknown16 July 2020 at 03:19

    Superb poem

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  37. bobby16 July 2020 at 03:28

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  38. Ganesan16 July 2020 at 03:31

    Wonderful poem. Keep writing

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 03:49

      Thanks a ton! Sure will... stay tuned for more content!

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  39. Selvi16 July 2020 at 03:49

    Innate Musing Talent...Totally awesome! You have a very powerful way with words...Keep writing...

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 06:00

      Thank you very much!! Your support means a lot!

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  40. LG16 July 2020 at 03:53

    Like mother, like child! Keep rocking Anjna
    Way to go!

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  41. Anushya16 July 2020 at 03:58

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  42. BINU JERLINE16 July 2020 at 04:15

    Excellent Darling ♥️ Keep writing Anjana ♥️

    -Binu

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  43. Ajith16 July 2020 at 04:37

    Keep writing Anjna! Well done!

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  44. Chandrodhayam16 July 2020 at 05:05

    Excellant fallen Angel Lucifer of this era

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  45. Unknown16 July 2020 at 14:25

    Impressed dear 👌👍
    Thanks for delighting us with Ur poetical talent 🙏
    Believe U gonna give tough competition to Ur great Mentor/Mum n Wishing U the same 👍😊

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    1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 23:34

      Thank you very much !!! Your support means everything! Glad you are impressed! Keep reading😊

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  46. Jeni16 July 2020 at 19:52

    It's really beautiful ❤️ Keep Going 💗 All the Best

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  47. JAGADEESH RAJA RAJAN19 July 2020 at 05:34

    Good to see the young poet in the making.. 😊 👍

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  48. Valarmathi.K.E19 July 2020 at 07:01

    The vocabulary and the logic is really wow. Happy for you my dear . I now visualising my little toddler as an emerging Nightingale.

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  49. Sumithra P22 July 2020 at 07:38

    Awesome verses.... Keep writing Anjana

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  50. Unknown21 April 2021 at 22:16

    Last part is unclear.

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