Thunder Throne

Thunder Throne


One fixed frozen moment
The earth convulsed.
The imps espied up
And the gnomes looked flummoxed!

The treants glimpsed up
With an argute beam of smile.
The elfins peeped up
Atypical, cast like a wyle!

Furthermore they heeded 
Ha! The earth didn't judder.
It was the sky that 
Hurtled light for them to shudder!

As they gazed up 
At the cloud of foam
There she was on thunder throne
And her crown, sure was known!

-J.B.Anjna

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  1. P. Bala S Devi16 July 2020 at 23:33

    Thanks a ton!❤

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  2. Francis17 July 2020 at 01:15

    Very nice

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  3. Rajeshwari17 July 2020 at 01:22

    Very nice

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  4. Unknown17 July 2020 at 02:03

    Very nice- budding great poet

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  5. Unknown17 July 2020 at 02:07

    Fantastic 👍

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  6. BOTANY17 July 2020 at 02:11

    👌👌👌

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  7. Tamil17 July 2020 at 02:24

    Nice anjana

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  8. Jeny17 July 2020 at 02:29

    Very nice....God bless you dear

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  9. Jayanthi Balakrishnan17 July 2020 at 02:39

    Beautiful verses. Good choice of diction. Wish you all the best. Keep at it dear budding writer.

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    1. P. Bala S Devi17 July 2020 at 03:06

      Thank you very much Mam! Your support means a lot!😊❤

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  10. Unknown17 July 2020 at 03:04

    Very interesting lines. Congrats dear young author Anjana

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    1. P. Bala S Devi17 July 2020 at 03:05

      Thank you very much for the support!!! It means a lot😊❤

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  11. Unknown17 July 2020 at 04:22

    Nice poem, narrative one.

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  12. Unknown17 July 2020 at 05:04

    Superb dear

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  13. Sudhiksha 200517 July 2020 at 06:27

    Well I am thunderstruck ;)

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  14. Eben17 July 2020 at 09:11

    Great poem.Way to go!!!

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  15. Krishnaveni.S17 July 2020 at 09:29

    Wonderful to read. Keep it up.

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  16. Bhavatharini17 July 2020 at 10:58

    Spectacular Work! Dear Blooming Star.
    Like everyone I'm afraid of thunder, But here it sounds good.
    I feel the taste of it more than three times.
    Keep up your outstanding effort dear Anjna.
    Anxiously awaiting for your next Creation...

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    1. P. Bala S Devi17 July 2020 at 20:51

      Thank you very much sista!!! Your support means a lot! 😊😊💖💖💖 Am glad you liked it!!!

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    2. Bhavatharini17 July 2020 at 23:06

      Anytime Dear.My genuine pleasure.

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  17. Dr. P. Yokeswari Nithya 17 July 2020 at 21:49

    Really good work dear

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  18. Dr. P. Yokeswari Nithya 17 July 2020 at 21:49

    Really good work dear

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  19. JAGADEESH RAJA RAJAN19 July 2020 at 05:37

    Nice.. Keep going... 😊

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  20. Valarmathi.K.E19 July 2020 at 06:59

    Dear my little toddler , you made me feel proud dear. Keep up.

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    1. P. Bala S Devi23 July 2020 at 11:59

      Thank you very much athai❤❤❤😊😊😊

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  21. தடாகம்19 July 2020 at 10:51

    இடிக்கவும் செய்யும் இடிஉணர்ந்தேன் வாழ்த்துகள் அஞ்சனா

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  22. Mannarsubbu31 July 2020 at 00:48

    Dear Child .. wanted to write my comments about your maiden work long back but due to the academic commitments I couldn't respond to you on time . My sincere apology .
    I read the piece of work penned by you thrice. Every word requires the assistance of Engligh dictionary
    to understand the contextual connotations of the poem . Words have come out like the eruption of Valcano .. Very complex to understand which has become the style of modern poets which you too have adopted, I believe .. Even the nature poet Wordsworth may require Master Guide to understand the paraphrase of the poem... Its very bombastic .. Yet I could see the creativity in you that too scientific creation.. keep it up .. share your artistic work regularly to us. What we can't enjoy let's endure it.. you have miles to go..I am sure you would be crowned in the near future foryour thunderous and lightning contributions .. All the best dear ..!

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  23. Unknown21 April 2021 at 22:14

    Lots of new words. Try to use simpler words and also sensory images.

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